Part2 Rachel(Chang)
Part 2
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Character
Inner unruly๐๐ป
material๐
dream๐ซ
American dream
The American dream is a spiritual thing๐ง . The United States has always opposed socialism and stressed freedom. Anyone can succeed through hard work and wisdom๐ช๐ป๐ช๐ป๐ช๐ป๐ช๐ป
In my opinion, the American dream is not as good as people generally think๐
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๐ผ♀️. The realization of the American dream is rare. Most people do not have the opportunity to realize their own American dream. The reality is very cruel, but there are still people trying.
Daisy & American dream
Daisy's existence is like a dream.๐
She and American dream have a common feature, which is pursued by people and not easily pursued by people.
People spend a lot of money but in the end their dreams are broken.❌❌
What impressed me most about Daisy was that when she saw Gatsby again
Gatsby said, "there was money in her words. "๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ
Her character has changed from simple to powerful.
The reason why she would return to Gatsby's arms is that Gatsby has huge wealth, rather than nostalgia for the pure love of that year.
Reality
Daisy she achieved her goal and got what she wanted๐
She got love, she got money, and she could walk away from Gatsby. ๐๐ป♀️๐๐ป♀️๐๐ป♀️
“She is charming and charming, just like the holy angel who landed in the world. Countless men fell in love with her. At the same time, she is ruthless, money oriented and frivolous, just like a devil.”๐๐ฐ❤️✈️๐๐ฐ❤️✈️๐๐ฐ❤️✈️๐๐ฐ❤️✈️๐๐ฐ❤️✈️๐๐ฐ❤️✈️
Change
I think Gatsby is the best book to change.
Everyone thinks Gatsby's American dream is successful. He has money and status, and many people are pursuing things.
But only he knows that he is not successful. What he pursues is daisy. For Gatsby, Daisy is his dream.๐
All he did was for Daisy, but Daisy never really belonged to Gatsby, and Gatsby never had a funeral. If he is not so stubborn, he will live an enviable life as a new money.
MEDIA
A Canadian nurse who went to New York to fight the epidemic was rejected when applying for a U.S. green card. Once the United States said that anyone who went to the United States to fight the epidemic could apply for a green card.
Just like Gatsby paid for Daisy, once Daisy promised to wait for Gatsby to come back, just like the green card America promised to give to people, and finally he wanted to dream a dream.
It gives people a lot of courage to try, but along the way no one can guarantee that the final result will be good.๐♂️๐♂️๐♂️
I commented on Nancy's part 2
Nancy's Personal comment for Rachel's Part 2.
ReplyDeleteHi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Rachel!!!!!!!!!!! ๐ธ ๐ธ ๐ธ ๐ธ
I'm your dear roommate and best friend ๐ง ๐ง ๐ง ๐ง. I think your blog is very colorful ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐!!!
A) GOOD JOB: I think the mission of each part of your blog is very clear and you follow the rules at every step. The blog uses a lot of quotes as evidence. ๐ก ๐ก ๐ก ๐กMy favorite part is the example of your media, which is very close to real life. The comparison between the case of the Canadian doctor fighting the epidemic and the image of Daisy shows the cruel reality of the American dream. ๐ฌ ๐ฌ ๐ฌ
The following part is extremely serious ๐ฎ ๐ฎ ๐ฎ, I hope Rachel sees not to kill ๐ ๐ ๐ me, ha ha ha!!! ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
B) PARTS THAT WEREN'T SUCCESSFUL: I think your blog is not very specific ๐ฌ ๐ฌ ๐ฌ, it lacks some details, it is a little general. ⚡️ ⚡️ ⚡️ For example, your first step, this is indeed a list of Daisy's characters, but it doesn't perfectly relate her image to the novel, so it's too simplistic. ๐ซ ๐ซ ๐ซ The same problem also occurs in your third and fourth steps. You just stated some facts, so these parts lack specific analysis and do not seem to be particularly in-depth and I think they still lack some logical connections. ‼️ ‼️To be honest, I don't think your answer to step 5 is particularly appropriate, because the question is who needs to change, not the influence on you from this book. ๐ค ๐ค ๐คI think the answer should be that society should change or individuals should change, so I have a different opinion with you on this step.
C) PARTS TO IMPROVE: I think you should improve the two aspects; ๐จ ๐จ ๐จone is the ability to review the topic, you should read the question carefully, ๐ ๐ ๐and then after a series of analysis and summary before the writing, I think you sometimes may be too eager forward. ๐ต ๐ต ๐ตThe other one is that I think you should improve your logical thinking ability; which I admit I also lack. Establish the connection between the middle points of things, and then make the explanation less far-fetched and general. ๐ซ ๐ซ ๐ซ๐ซ You should not simplify too many things, which will lead to inadequate analysis and lack of depth in the article.
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