Hao(Part3）

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Hao ’s evaluation of Martin ’s first part, 

I think that what you do meets the teacher ’s requirements and is a good job

advantage:
This article fully expounds the image of the American dream in the author's mind, and clearly expresses his views on the American dream, with his own attitude. The author also demonstrates through the very representative examples of characters, which increases the persuasion and credibility.
Disadvantages:
In this article, the author does not set out from himself to explain the relationship between himself and the American dream. The reality or the ideal is not clearly shown, so it seems that the article is not particularly profound.
improvement:
I think the author makes a horizontal comparison between his life and situation and the American dream to make his argument more true, and his efforts are not unable to change everything.

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