PART 1-- Darius(Dapeng) Zhao-- The American Dream, the equality based on the respect.

Hi, here is Darius!


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The core content of the American dreamπŸ’΅πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡Έ is equality⚖️, as stated in the Declaration of Independence "all men are created equal." 
It seems to me that in order to realize the American dream of equality for all, people must learn to respect

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There are no❌ perfect people. Although we have been educated since childhood to respect others, the weakness of human nature will still make us make mistakes. Maybe this is just an excuse, because I feel guilty.)😡😡😡 
I have been pursuing perfection since childhoodπŸ‘¦πŸ»πŸ‘¦πŸ», which has made me perform well in many aspects. After a long time, I became proud of myself, and unconsciously, I found myself to look down on (πŸ™„πŸ™„πŸ™„no no no, that's tough!) those students who are poorly studying from the bottom of my heart. Although I never showed it in appearance, I did have this idea😡. Until I went to high school, my weakness in language subjects was reflected. What surprised me was that my Chinese score counted down in the class😱😱😱. This embarrassed me😨. I was afraid that others would laugh at me, but at the same time I understood how I felt as a poor student. With the increase of life experience, I also understand that learning is not❌ the only standard to measure a person. Since then, I have been trying my best to correct my inner views and treat everyone equally, thinking that everyone has some aspects to be respected. I think the equality that the American Dream is to promote is precisely this kind of equality that respects others from the heart. 

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A movie "Green Book" released in 2019 deeply shocked my πŸ’œ . It tells the story of a racially discriminating 
πŸ‘ˆwhite man who discriminated against blacksacts as a bodyguard for an aristocratic black musician πŸ‘‰
and escorts him to play in the southern United States. After experiencing various injustices together, the white man gradually saw the charm of the black man. Although musician knew he would be humiliated, he took the initiative to perform in the southern United States, in order to make his race no longer discriminated, which made white the man respectful of the musician, and this respect gradually eliminates his prejudice against black people. The climax of this film showed through black pubs, a scenes of different races applauding for the music, which shows that music should not be discriminated against, and race should not be discriminated against. Even when white man knows that black man is gay, he still chooses to respect and said, Don’t worry about it, I have been working nightclubs in the New York City my life, I know it ’s complicated world. This conveys the idea of ​​equality in the American Dream very well, which helps people be respectful.

Comments

  1. Hi, Darius!!!!
    This is your friend Alisa!!!! And this is my comments for your Part 1. First of all, I have to say that I really like your blog and I read it for many times!
    A) GOOD JOB: " I have been pursuing perfection since childhood, which has made me
    always perform well in many aspects. " I really like your personal example in the second paragraph! You did a great job!!! Because this thing seems like a real-life experience, I can say that I also had this experience in the past! At the end of this paragraph, you also connect your own experience with the American Dream, which makes the readers feel more interested.

    However, I don't mean that every part in your blog is very good. To be honest, your blog made me feel a little confused! I think you can be more focus on explaining one thing in your blog!!

    B) PARTS THAT WEREN’T SUCCESSFUL: Nice main points in the introduction, however, it could be good to have one clearer thesis statement. You should connect these two parts together to make a better thesis. (the second sentence and the last sentence in the first paragraph) Also, I think you can use the quotations from the "Green Book", such as the words they said. Also, you should talk about whether your American Dream is realistic or not. You missed a chance to answer a question.

    C) PARTS TO IMPROVE: I think the third paragraph is just talking about the movie “Green Book”, but not using more words to connect with your own definition about the American Dream. You were trying to show inequality and how that can change, but it is not really clear. So I think you can do more connections!

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