Part 3 John

I comment Standford’s Part1

I agree with his idea, everyone should have their unique ideas. Everyone should know they are unique instead of following others. Wow this a very good idea. But for the example, I can’t say it is not a good idea. But the description and the analysis for the example are little strange, because in the analysis, you talked about “As the article states, people's independence is different”. But the part you used from the article just talked about you people should be independent. I trust in the article, there will be more sentence about this and I think you should use them in the blog, because the blog main about being unique, not being independent. Other wise it will be better to extend this idea “genetic variation implies that we are different from anyone else”, some ideas like this can explain your idea much better.