Frank-- ALL PARTS COMBINED
Part3：I think Hao ’s thesis is very good but I need to add more about the arguments in the article, so that he can better reflect his theme. At the same time, I think Hao needs to add his analysis list in the first part. It can be seen that the difference and change of the American dream can also make the article more contrasting. Then my suggestion is that Hao can make the paper clearer and how to add pictures to make the article easier to understand. These are my opinion All dreams have souls, If the dream loses its soul, it can only be a dream. The dream will eventually wake up and be disillusioned, no matter what it is! Part I: Let's first understand what the American dream is: The American dream in the declaration of independence in 1776 is a dream and a power! It inspires all Americans who are unwilling to submit to fate to dream of creating a country based on equality, democracy and freedom! After two world wars and the efforts of the Amer